tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3112529335397528732.post3343871439252114092..comments2023-09-27T08:21:15.626-04:00Comments on Obscurum: O.T. Three updateArkonbeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11056581569235023216noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3112529335397528732.post-55117349952504273782008-08-06T09:29:00.000-04:002008-08-06T09:29:00.000-04:00Hey - I enjoyed reading your comics. I'll check ba...Hey - I enjoyed reading your comics. I'll check back later for the updates on #3.Rolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02103804480646939038noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3112529335397528732.post-10704136698937436402008-07-20T11:10:00.000-04:002008-07-20T11:10:00.000-04:00the guy and the mistery[sic] girl's face look basi...<I>the guy and the mistery[sic] girl's face look basically the same</I><BR/><BR/>Yeah. A bit. It's one of the things I'm working on to beat. <A HREF="http://www.amazon.com/Making-Comics-Storytelling-Secrets-Graphic/dp/0060780940" REL="nofollow">Scott McCloud</A> talks about that. The problem is, I only have one face to do expressions in the mirror with. I did try hard to base the guy on a friend from high school, but it's a challenge.<BR/><BR/>The anatomy in the crouch is <I>okay</I>, but needs work. The only model I had was myself and digicam, so adding curves and other soft bits was all extrapolation.Arkonbeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11056581569235023216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3112529335397528732.post-7912877723571349842008-07-15T09:53:00.000-04:002008-07-15T09:53:00.000-04:00The girl's anatomy looks a bit weird in the large ...The girl's anatomy looks a bit weird in the large panel in the penultimate page. <BR/>And I couldn't help noticing, looking through the previous pages, how the guy and the mistery girl's face look basically the same. <BR/><BR/>But apart from that, the use of the 'mmm' onomatopea is fantastic and I like how you captured her movement as she backflips off the roof of the car in the last panel.Thomas Fummohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09662755693693961736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3112529335397528732.post-25342049906491712782008-07-09T19:49:00.000-04:002008-07-09T19:49:00.000-04:00LOVE the update-it's getting exciting~!Sorry to he...LOVE the update-it's getting exciting~!<BR/><BR/>Sorry to hear about your crack up (well figuratively, that is!)...let us know what the doc says!ladybughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08814418184624819506noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3112529335397528732.post-30828628237278931962008-07-09T13:16:00.000-04:002008-07-09T13:16:00.000-04:00I'm really liking how the cover of this story seem...I'm really liking how the cover of this story seemed a bit misleading. I was expecting an old school "monster-on-the-wing" type story and to see the high tech approach surprised me! <BR/><BR/>For some reason I couldn't help but think "Because he's holding a thermal detonator!" when she pulled out the device...Andre Messierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10093510281434621951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3112529335397528732.post-5077336023430767402008-07-08T12:34:00.000-04:002008-07-08T12:34:00.000-04:00I have a feeling that if you couldn't draw with yo...I have a feeling that if you couldn't draw with your hand you'd just use your mouth or your feet instead.<BR/><BR/>Glad you're safe.Dean Wormerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06214049238722718299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3112529335397528732.post-36703772854102905842008-07-07T22:43:00.000-04:002008-07-07T22:43:00.000-04:00Holy cow I hope nothing is broken!On another note ...Holy cow I hope nothing is broken!<BR/><BR/>On another note I was looking around your site for an email address and I couldn't find one. I was thinking maybe we could trade some art and I could throw in one of my comic books. Email me if you are interested :)<BR/>ladygorgon@yahoo.com<BR/><BR/>Hope the doctor visit goes okay!Beccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01650210980795003057noreply@blogger.com